Sunday, October 17, 2010

evaluation for task 2

Self-Evaluation
What is the thesis for your paper? If you work hard while you're young it will pay off in the end

List the main points you make in your paper. Hard work, Smart choices, Success

What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation? What questions i could ask.

What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper? Reading " A Road to Success"

How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? 2 For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting? sat at a keyboard and composed

What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on? show an example of someone with good education and someone with a bad education

What are you most pleased with about this paper? the story i recieved from my grandpa

1 comment:

  1. HI Taylor,

    I don't think it would be necessary to compare someone's experience who received an education to someone who did not. The focus is on your grandfather's experience alone. I'm happy that you enjoyed interviewing him though.

    Ms. C

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